Talk:Scioto Valley Chorus

Needs an overhaul! Reads like a promotional website.

• Look at other chorus wiki pages for examples.
• "About" is an exact copy of their "About" page.

1. Convert to third-person.
2. Remove contest history - already covered in "Contest Results"
3. Convert to "History"?
4. Condense - more fact, less fluff.

• "Directors" is an exact copy of their "Co-Directors" page.

1. Condense - more fact, less fluff.

--Paks Paladin 21:05, 24 July 2010 (UTC)